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We have fallen so far from the perfection that we had strived to become.
What happened to that fat pink eraser
that could take away
even the largest of mistakes?

True love is in the eye of the beholder,
and this beholder isn't happy with what she sees.
Blind spots will eventually fade,
and the outcome becomes worse than orginially percieved.
Curse the eyes that were weak enough to
be seduced into blindness.

Hearts can only handle so much abuse;
the constant blows have caused it to cave upon itself.
Wanting to believe it was worth it, wanting to believe in
you
was the largest downfall of all.

Sorry doesn't work anymore,
and love is a relative term.
Bruises and bleeding became normal,
so all we can do is burn.
©2008-2009 ~myjarofdirt
:iconmyjarofdirt:

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That took a long time. What do you think?

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:iconayeka-granger:
o_o I like it lots.. And it made me a little sad cause some of it fits with my relationship atm D:

"Blind spots will eventually fade"
Sounds like she's realizing, or noticing, things she hasn't before and as a result, the relationship goes bad.

I think the time put into it was worth it. It's a good poem and it speaks truth c:

Oh, I thought it'd be best to ask before doing it, would you mind if I used some of this in my screen name on MSN? Of course you will get credit for it, I'm just not sure if you'd want it to be used like that.

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98% of Deviants don't know the difference between "your" and "you're." If you're one of the 2% that wants to punch 'em, put this in your sig.
:iconmyjarofdirt:
Thanks for the comment :]. It means a lot to me. And yeah you can use it, that's totally fine :]. But thank you for asking.

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You need to be broken because pain is the only thing that is certain.
:icongaaramyidol:
grrr... reminds me a little of matt medina and me.... T_T I dieing. lolz wonderful writing tho charm! You always have a way with a pencil!

Love,
Bee

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Life is a dream ,so make every second count till you wake up.
:iconechoed-voice:
Wow.

I feel like I should say more. But actually... just wow.

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I'd really, really rather be napping right now.
Comments make me happy - [link] - *cries slightly* Please?
:iconmyjarofdirt:
That's a...good think, I'm hoping? Thank you though.

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You need to be broken because pain is the only thing that is certain.
:iconechoed-voice:
That is indeed a good thing. The only problem is that I can't pick out the part I love because it works so perfectly as a whole.

So in other words - you kick poetic ass.

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I'd really, really rather be napping right now.
Comments make me happy - [link] - *cries slightly* Please?
:iconmyjarofdirt:
Thank you :].

Kicking poetic ass...that is an amazing compliment.

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You need to be broken because pain is the only thing that is certain.

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