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Stepping back from it,
I suppose you could say
That everything we did
Was wrong

But you were lonely
And so was I
And she brought us together
So together we stayed

(We’re both at fault)

But it went too far
Our “friendship” became too real
And it hurt her
In the worst way

But we couldn’t see that.
Or if we did,
We pushed it away
Because we were only thinking of ourselves.

Two loners
Who just wanted a different kind of friend,
Who sought it in the wrong people.

Stepping back from it,
I suppose you could say
That everything we did
Was wrong
©2007-2009 ~myjarofdirt
:iconmyjarofdirt:

Author's Comments

I'm alive! After not writing forever, I posted something! Finally! Haha...

This poem is about NarutoAddict765, me, and her ex. Mainly me and her ex, and how we became close friends, even though we shouldn't have. There's more too it, but explaining would take forever so...

What do you think? I'm kinda unsure about it, because I haven't written in a while, but I think it's somewhat decent...

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:icontameanimal:
You know what's kind of sad? Mom was right about that.... Wow.
:evillaugh:Isn't this emoticon cool or what?

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No guy ever won a war by dying for his country. He won the war by making the other poor guy die for his country.
:iconmyjarofdirt:
';Poor guy'. Aw, you edited it. Haha. My sig PWNS yours.

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You need to be broken because pain is the only thing that is certain.
:icontameanimal:
Yeah, I'm not much for swearing...:dygel:

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No guy ever won a war by dying for his country. He won the war by making the other poor guy die for his country.

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